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Pursue or Pursued.(short story?)


Thursday 29th March 2012
 

Pursue or Pursued.

By Gerry A/C 29th March 2012

His legs were pedaling with all his might, sweat beading down his forehead, dripping into his eyes, stinging and blurring his vision. He kept looking back, over his shoulder, he could not see any sign of his pursuers, but he could hear them. The rumble of wheels running over the damp stony track. The voices shouting out after him. This made his legs go even faster. His aching muscles beginning to tell. The noise of them beginning to get louder, he knew they were closing in. He could not give in, he could not slacken off. He knew he had to keep going. His breathing was very deep, he was panting hard, he felt his heart beat crashing against his rib cage. He did not know how much longer he could carry on. But he knew he must. Again he looked behind, over his shoulder and again no sign. He was quickly brought around because this minor distraction made him catch the edge of a pothole in this forest track. A silly mistake, he should know better, potholes and puddles were everywhere. The recent damp weather made them worse, they became soggy, his front wheel had caught an edge and slid, making him swerve and loose balance temporarily. Weaving along the track a few yards, legs pushing to the ground to regain his balance and momentum. Slowing slightly, panic in his eyes, because now he saw his pursuers turn the bend a few hundred yards behind him. ‘Shit, they are gaining” he cursed to himself.

            A further few yards along, he was re-gaining full control of his machine, his legs pushing full momentum on the pedals again, this jolt made him more aware, as he had to gain full concentration of what was in front of him.

Standing now, full body effort now being used to overcome the long bend and raising incline, sapping all his efforts and energy. The feel he was hurting, the burning in his chest and thinking that his muscles are going to explode. He kept telling himself,  ‘Cannot slow up, cannot let them catch me’ The only consolation he could think of was that those behind would be feeling the same. He hoped!

Pushing hard, speeding along the now leveled out track, dodging potholes, ducking from low over hanging branches. Weaving and dodging like a real professional. He turned another bend, the bright sun shone straight into his eyes, blinding him, he lost control and tumbled to the side of the track. ‘Shit, come on’ he shouted at himself.

He gained his composure, and quickly jump back onto his machine and headed off again. He tilted his hat, hoping it would shade his eyes, it did, but he still had to keep his head lowered.

Need not bother looking behind, he knew they were close, he knew they had gained, it was negative actions that he could no longer afford to do. Every negative movement he knew they would gain a few yards on him. But in his mind he knew they were feeling the same hurt as him. That minor accident did give time for his chest to ease a little and relaxing his breathing.

If you would like to read the concluding paragraphs, it is not too many words then please follow the link to my               ‘Writing Hell‘  blog, Thank you!

http://cobbie69.wordpress.com/

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March 30, 2012 - Posted by | Uncategorized

24 Comments »

  1. My goodness Gerry! My heart is racing, my muscles are taunt,I am out of breath and looking over my shoulder, all because you had me on that bike with you rider. So I guess I’m pursued as well. Great post. Going over to read more.

    BE ENCOURAGED! BE BLESSED!

    Comment by fgassette | March 30, 2012 | Reply

    • I had read and re-read this and every time I changed little and by doing dummy publishing it kept giveing me changes to make. Eventually I said sod it just post it. It sounds so good when people like and comment. Francine thank you very much…

      Comment by cobbies69 | March 30, 2012 | Reply

  2. Slick move, Gerry … build the momentum, then send us on our way … to your other blog! 🙂 LOL. I’ll have to keep this in mind. Now onto the link … mission accomplished!

    Comment by orples | March 30, 2012 | Reply

    • It worked, did you like? promoting the written word…..Thank you orples,
      will keep being originallllll LOL!

      Comment by cobbies69 | March 30, 2012 | Reply

  3. Really got my own blood racing this morning Cobbie. Love the build up and then taking us to your other blog, nice touch. I’ll be watching for more.

    Comment by Barefoot Baroness | March 30, 2012 | Reply

    • hey Baroness, got you hooked enough, haha! trying to promote,,thanks so much glad you likeeee.;)

      Comment by cobbies69 | March 30, 2012 | Reply

      • I loveeee even more than you know. Love the way ypu hooked us and then took us for yet another ride. Please keep it up!

        Comment by Barefoot Baroness | March 31, 2012

  4. I love this post Gerry

    Comment by jakesprinter | March 31, 2012 | Reply

    • Thank you Jake glad you appreciate so much..;)

      Comment by Gerry | March 31, 2012 | Reply

  5. Gerry, I can just hear the scary music in the background. ;-).
    And the tension builds… Love it.

    Comment by Gemma | March 31, 2012 | Reply

    • do dum do dum, hehe hehe! thank you Gemma for another lovely comment,…;)

      Comment by Gerry | March 31, 2012 | Reply

  6. Wow! Really nice writing. I will definitely follow the story.

    Comment by LediaR | April 1, 2012 | Reply

    • That is a double wow! With your praise, Ledia makes it feel really worth the effort, and doubles my enjoyment..;) thank you…

      Comment by cobbies69 | April 1, 2012 | Reply

      • You are very welcome. I am also grateful that you have become a faithful follower of my horror fantasy series. Hope you continue to like it. I will definitely continue reading your work as well.

        Comment by LediaR | April 1, 2012

      • I do so appreciate that, and yes I do enjoy your series, a little behind at moment. but will catch up, thanks so much Ledia for your support as well.

        Comment by cobbies69 | April 1, 2012

      • You are very welcome.

        Comment by LediaR | April 1, 2012

  7. You sly devil, get us hooked and then we have no choice but to check out Writing Hell. ha! Very clever. Suspenseful story, thus far. On the edge of my seat and going to check it out over there. 😉

    Comment by Carol B Sessums | April 1, 2012 | Reply

    • Well Carol did it work, and did you enjoy, you know me trying to be original and different. but hope the outcome is fun,,,..hehehe!. thanks so much again. always caring…;)

      Comment by cobbies69 | April 1, 2012 | Reply

  8. This had Tour de France written all over it – nice piece of prose 🙂

    Comment by 2e0mca | April 3, 2012 | Reply

    • Not as fast as Finchley buses, heheehe! !LOL thank you for your great comment and visit. 😉

      Comment by cobbies69 | April 4, 2012 | Reply

  9. This is an interesting write. Left the reader anxious to read more.
    As I will now – going to see the ending.
    Very good ….

    Comment by Inside the Mind of Isadora | April 4, 2012 | Reply

    • Thanks Isadora, it is a start and glad you like it. Short story’s seem easier than long (novel) ones. Still trying to finish the NANOWRIMO novel. Again thanks so much for your welcomed support…;)

      Comment by cobbies69 | April 4, 2012 | Reply

  10. A story that brings excitement, suspense and thrill. Great post my friend. Happy Easter.

    Comment by island traveler | April 10, 2012 | Reply

    • Thanks so much, and hope the Dark Globe likes it as much as you and and others do. thanks again..:) Ditto on Easter…

      Comment by cobbies69 | April 10, 2012 | Reply


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