What Morning?-[Poem] +
Wednesday 12th June 2013.
While researching my last couple of posts, something ignited in my memory, and reminded me of a poem I started a short while ago. And because of a serious event that happened to me a couple of evenings ago, and a doctor was called, I thought I would finish it, and let all of you have a read. I know there are many people in the world that feel something of the same, and some of my followers also. But it was something that hit me stronger than any other time, so with these words I thought it was a nice time, what with the Inner Peace award I have just done. I needed some Inner Peace. All in similar mood, hope you all enjoy..Thank you very much…
What Morning? Ga/c©
The morning arrives once again,
Like a darkness that causes me pain.
Each morning I am awake, the same thing.
I wonder what the day will bring.
The morning comes with no warning,
Surely no sleep, means there is no morning.
This morning, how can it be a new day.
In my world, I always try to find a way.
Daily dozing, but never actually asleep,
Long days, tiring times, sinking deep.
The clock, ticking, night day, night day,
My body, says lay down and drift away.
Resting on my pillow, eyes they close.
But, no sleep, only dreams, I soon arose.
In time the body says, ‘no more, help me,’
Pain hits so hard, screaming to be free.
My morning, no such a pleasure,
Seeing sunrise, drifting dew, such treasure.
Pain killers, massage and pressure points
Only eight hours sleep will ease my joints.
Now months have passed and I collapse,
Happening like a cycle, all my energy it saps.
Try telling, and still no one listens to me,
This prisoner, all he wants is to be free.
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I am a person with plenty of time on my hands. In the last couple of years I have started these blogs/posts mainly to speak my mind and generally release some pent-up frustration.
In my early years I played the guitar ( and still do) for several bands, covering various styles, rock and roll, country and middle of the road.I played as a soloist, writing my own songs, lyrics and poems, and started in folk clubs. So I thought this might be a good way to express myself and hope that I can pass on to other people. While I have been doing this I have also discovered other people whose writing I also like so am learning as I travel this road to discovery.
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Feeling your pain, hope all is well now. Keeping you in my thoughts and prayers.
BE ENCOURAGED! BE BLESSED!
Thank you Francine,, so honoured to read your words of support,, it all helps.. welcome as always 😉
Ouch! That seems MOST unpleasant!
The music is addictively wacky.
It can be very much so, and the music was found and thought was a way of making light of the post.. As always welcome and thank you. 😉
Gerry sorry about how you feel and it comes across in the poem.
Do you mind if I put it on poets corner, I would like the poets to read it.
Harry thank you so much,,, be my guest,, you honour me truly.. so yes please do … appreciate your support.. 😉
Do not own what seeks to own you
But turn away from the pain and embrace
the living hope that fills you with a precious
breath each day! Know that you will still be
with Him no matter what because your heart,
and your spirit honor him always, and He will
always bless you, even still in a much better way!
Spiritual hugs and blessings to you always my
brother along with much love!
Wendell, what can I say,, tears are close, thank you for this, I will copy it into my poetry files /book and put it with this poem if you do not mind that is,, with your name with it. Thank you so very much…. 😉
This makes me sad. I hope you are feeling better. I wish you peace. Gerry.
Thank you Gemma, I am a tad bit but it a regular part of my life,, but not as bad as others I know.. this poem is for them as well… because it is part of me I just accept it as part of me.. thank you for your lovely words as always, and welcome… 😉
Wow. ‘No sleep means there is no morning.’ I get this, because I too spend many nights lying in my bed with my mind buzzing, keeping me awake until sunrise. But you seem to be in physical pain. I’m sorry this happens to you. Surely writing and publishing this poem has relieved your pain a little bit.
Trish, thank you again for these wonderful words….yes writing it and posting it released so frustrations that pop up once in awhile,,, this is also for others that I know who suffer from similar… the physical pain is varying.. thank you for your words and support.. 😉
Your poem resonates deeply within my own spirit. I am sorry that you are struggling with spiked symptoms & lack of sleep My kind Sir. Life is so unpredictable, even one night at a time.
Your description will always weigh gently on my mind as you have expressed the insanity of living with pain & insomnia so well.
You wrote what many cannot verbalize.Including me.
Thank you my lady Tj, much appreciated,, your words are meaningful.. 😉
The pain in this poem is palpable. Sorry to hear you cannot sleep on top of that. A little relief must be coming your way soon. Take care.
Thank you,, this poem was just me trying to express what myself an many others go through,,,although pleased with the result it is rather a sad verse.. unintentional.. I thank you so much and please always feel welcome ,, 🙂
Gerry your poem is now on site.
http://poetscornerblog.wordpress.com/
Thank you and so appreciated,, and honoured my friend.. 😉
perfect intro:
“The morning arrives once again,
Like a darkness that causes me pain…”
Thank you Frizz,, much appreciate this praise.. welcome and honoured… 😉
Very effective and evocative. I’ve had these feelings many times, but you put them into verse so well. Bravo!
Thank you Lorna, your words always mean so much to me… welcome and appreciated 😉
I’m so sorry for your suffering, Gerry. Your poem is very powerful. Sending you hugs. 🙂
Thank you very much,,, so appreciated and welcome.. 🙂
dear Gerry, I read and re-read your poem…I hope your body re-energizes…i wish you love crystals of healing…I have some body pains…my back goes our every other week if I am not careful…but today, I suffer from depression and losing a friend because of it…it is a hard day….so send me love crystals too…because I need them today
Johann, I will with all my pleasure and heart send you all the love and well wishing crystals and fairy dust to you. I will send them through the air and hopefully reach you with the love they are sent.
imagine sitting on the bank of the golden lake..looking at sunset…in my thoughts…
The lake shimmering in the moonlight,
Silvery reflections rippling water,
The orange sun now out of sight
Admire for too long, it will capture.
I hope you are felling better….
Take Care…
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Thank you very much and yes not too bad,,welcome, as always.. 😉