Write 101 Day 8 [Run and Find]

Sitting on the Porch 2

Wednesday 11th June 2014


Go to a local café, park, or public place and report on what you see. Get detailed: leave no nuance behind. Today’s twist: write an adverb-free post. If you’d rather not write a new post, revisit and edit a previous one: excise your adverbs and replace them with strong, precise verbs.



Write 101 – Death of Adverbs. My story based on a small part of the New Forest, UK.

Day 8

Words 586

Gaa/C June 2014.

They ran along the small path that followed the river, winding and twisting. Some places it diverted into the wood and eventually finding its way back to the river’s edge. By-passing the bramble bushes and fallen trees, tree roots ready to trip them. On the path edge gorse trying to prick them, and the fern making their movement difficult. But they managed to reach the bridge.

The shadows…

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